Czarina! I really like how creative and colorful your poster is. Although you have a grammtical error in the beginning "EACH LITTLE THINGS YOU DO" You can either fix and put each of the little things you do or each little thing you do. I do enjoy this poster a lot but I also remember you telling me this other idea you had about the poster and I think that way would be better in potraying what you think your coming of age is all about. :)
Hey Czarina :) OK....so I love the color scheme of this I think this would qualify as a poster because there are not a lot of pictures that are merged together. The subject was mainly you. I suggest that you should mix it up a bit. Maybe you could have one picture as the subject, and a text that would be motivating. Sorry if I'm not being that helpful, my poster isn't that great too haha.
I agree with brittany...there is a grammatical error. It should be, Every little thing you do makes you grow wiser each time.
Hi Czarina, *chuckle* I can see that your peers are really working hard to give you a thorough critique. I think they are on the right track in recognizing that the ideas behind the poster are good ones but that the poster itself could be tweaked a bit to be even better... So here's my try at it... Background graphic: it's a nice one, but does it have significance? I was wondering if it had to do with the idea of growing and blooming or something...but the graphic does not emphasize that...so you may want to revise, look for another, use something else as background, etc I see the point made by the others about the photos...perhaps here, your skill in BJ can help out...it may be that it would work better if you could use some ECUs in certain photographs to really highlight the point you are making... or use rack focus in some...depth of field...that way, it would not look like "photo album" shots but shots specifically targeting your concepts.... Hope this helps :) mrs s
Czarina!
ReplyDeleteI really like how creative and colorful your poster is.
Although you have a grammtical error in the beginning "EACH LITTLE THINGS YOU DO"
You can either fix and put each of the little things you do or each little thing you do.
I do enjoy this poster a lot but I also remember you telling me this other idea you had about the poster and I think that way would be better in potraying what you think your coming of age is all about. :)
Hey Czarina :)
ReplyDeleteOK....so I love the color scheme of this
I think this would qualify as a poster because there are not a lot of pictures that are merged together.
The subject was mainly you.
I suggest that you should mix it up a bit.
Maybe you could have one picture as the subject, and a text that would be motivating. Sorry if I'm not being that helpful, my poster isn't that great too haha.
I agree with brittany...there is a grammatical error.
It should be,
Every little thing you do makes you grow wiser each time.
Hi Czarina,
ReplyDelete*chuckle* I can see that your peers are really working hard to give you a thorough critique. I think they are on the right track in recognizing that the ideas behind the poster are good ones but that the poster itself could be tweaked a bit to be even better...
So here's my try at it...
Background graphic: it's a nice one, but does it have significance? I was wondering if it had to do with the idea of growing and blooming or something...but the graphic does not emphasize that...so you may want to revise, look for another, use something else as background, etc
I see the point made by the others about the photos...perhaps here, your skill in BJ can help out...it may be that it would work better if you could use some ECUs in certain photographs to really highlight the point you are making... or use rack focus in some...depth of field...that way, it would not look like "photo album" shots but shots specifically targeting your concepts....
Hope this helps :)
mrs s