Tuesday, March 9, 2010

Revised Metaphor Poem: "Czarina, A Star"

I am like a star
I shine brightly
so that others may choose to follow me
and my bright example of righteousness and justice
I throw my little light beam so far
that I outshine the bad deeds in the world
and as that beam shines into the minds of others
it overcomes them with the need to strive for excellence
and just like stars
I am brighter once nighttime comes
because throughout the day I learn the lessons that have been taught to me
There are other forces that try to break me
but I use my strength to keep everything together
People look at me and say that I am like the others
but once you gaze at and start to explore me
you'll come to find that I am much different in many ways
I may come across you as you hold in a wish
and I'll do what I can to make that wish come true
I am like a star

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