-Now that I look back at my essays in the past (one's that I have written before entering high school), I have improved my writing skills by a landslide. This only happened because of what I have learned in the past two quarters. What we focused on this semester were the six traits. Four of them are mentioned in my online portfolio. My online portfolio consists of information on what I have done this semester in my menemac classes. On the "english page", I have put examples of some of my work that best describe four out of the six traits.
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Your post serves two purposes
It is an opportunity for them to comment on your learning and
It is part of my assessment of your attainment of General Learning Outcome #5, "Effective Communicator." Your sharing of the portfolio should enable your parents to reflect and respond to the three questions above.
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Please answer the following questions after reading and looking through my portfolio:
What did you like best about my portfolio and portfolio conference? What would you like to see me improve on in my portfolio?
From your point of view, which of my attainments of the 4 traits of writing is of most value? Please explain why you feel it is important and what about my documentation of it impresses you.
Which of the traits of writing would you like me to focus on in the coming semester?
POSTED BY: CHARITO CABERTO (Mom)
ReplyDeleteFirst of all, I would like to congratulate you on all the accomplishments that you have made so far in school. Precious (Czarina), when I read your online portfolio, I could understand what you were trying to inculcate about the traits that you mentioned. I also learned what they meant! Very good job.
I really liked your layout, the colors all matched. What amazes me is how much you have learned in menemac in only 1 semester. Anyway, another thing that caught my eye was the organization of your links. It was easy to navigate. Some of your descriptions contain repetition. You should try to stay away from that. You should also revise the sentences that are in your description so that they are not said repeatedly. Other than that, I have no other negative comment on your online portfolio. I thought your examples matched your traits. By the way, you have improved a lot on your writing and grammar. Good job. After reading all of your essays, your best at voice. I think you should work more on Word Choice, because some of your essays still have some common words.
-Good luck! Keep on dreaming!
[Mom]